hi every one i am flarenial, the owner of dragonball resurrection of truth we have had a server change and the new add is frostmud.com port 8000. and we are currently looking for builders and 1 or 2 coders and always seeking new player so come see us and have fun we look forward to seeing you
I'm sorry Snwclown, I couldn't get past the very first room. I thought my eyes were going to bleed from the atomic color bomb. That is a serious turn off for me if I immediately have to squint at the log in of a game.
I usually try to test people's muds, but alas, I could not on this one.
I must admit though, it is hard to read a post when I can't catch my breath. A period or comma goes a long way. They even help set a tone or allow the reader to understand a thought process. Try it. It may take a bit longer, but at least the reader won't have to pull out his Webster's "Typo to English" Translator.
Heh, I think I need merely point to one of my cratpegs as proof of my own reputation as a stickler for proper language. To be honest, though, I'm starting to simply ignore stuff that's poorly written; in most cases asking to sound like a civilized human being leads to little gain.