18 Dec, 2009, snwclown wrote in the 1st comment:
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well players and foes you all know me we are looking for new and exciting talant for our mud .
we are lookinhg for players , couple of builders and a coder so come visit us on the mud

moemuds.webhop.net
4002

and my aim is snwclown2000 for aim and yahoo both
18 Dec, 2009, Kayle wrote in the 2nd comment:
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Well, it's almost a step in the right direction.

You still didn't give any kind of information as to what sets your mud apart from other DBZ MUDs. You also didn't take the time to spell-check it either. Or Grammar check it either. Lemme help:


snwclown said:
Well, players and foes, you all know me. We are looking for new and exciting talent for our mud.
We are looking for players, a couple of builders, and a coder so come visit us on the mud.

moemuds.webhop.net
4002

And my aim is snwclown2000 for aim and yahoo both.


Doesn't that look a lot better? Well, no, not really. But it's a start.
18 Dec, 2009, Tricky wrote in the 3rd comment:
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And so it starts.

Tricky
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