Anarchy:The Forest Edge: exit wrong (west)
Potato:Narrow Ravine: narrow ravine : stream to turn southwards
Froody:Farm Lane: Says here lane continues East but no exit east
Mutt:Dark Alley: 'The parrot squarks' should be 'squawks'!  Mutt.
Mutt:Farm Lane: FARM LANE - '...north & east' should be '...north & west'?  Mutt
Mutt:Quarry entrance: QUARRY ENTRANCE - '...pool with on ledges...'??????  Mutt
Mutt:Rocky ledge: ROCKY LEDGE - '...being to loose...' should be '...too...'.  Mutt
Mutt:Marsh: MARSH - 'To the west and east...while to the east'.  Two easts??? Mutt
Percy:Cave path: "iventory" in syntax section should be inventory
Plop:The Northern Gate: This persona exists, what is *its* password:
Hobbit:The Northern Gate: what is ITS password, not what is it's! - love hobbit
Humbug:South yard: ....mud with all1 you weight
Boris:The Temple Courtyard: